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祁胜初细评09年6月四级考试写作真题 |
2009-06-22 10:02:55 作者：祁胜初 来源：南宁新东方学校 点击数： |
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2009年6月四级考试写作部分点评
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about Free Admission to Museums. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
1、现在越来越多的博物馆免费开放原因；
2、这样会产生的问题；
3、我的观点。
各位四级朋友：
这个四级题目是今天考试完，我一个学生给我发信息到手机上我看到的。看到题目后，我觉得，出题者实在是厉害，这样的题目让多多少少热衷于猜题和押题的老师多少有些失落。因为，这样的题目放到10年前，似乎也不为过！
但仔细研究发现，出题者还是稍微费了点功夫的！以往咱们的四级作文，基本都是直接对立观点型的，或者是社会现象型的。从最近四年来看，一般的题目都是：
第一段：社会现象的描述；
第二段：正反观点的陈述；
第三段：自己的观点，不一定非要明确的观点，纯属讨论的观点。也就是说，可以肯定，可以否定，也可以二者兼备。
但是今年的题，稍有异处。最后第三段在陈述自己观点的时候，要求一定要指出自己的明确观点，是同意还是不同意？只能二者选一，否则，这篇文章就成了一篇根本没有论点的文章了。
那这篇文章的结构应该是：
第一段：博物馆免费开放的社会现象描述+原因（3--4句话即可）
第二段：有人认为这样不好的理由（2-3个即可，根据你的第三段的论证长短决定）
第三段：我的观点（明确观点+2-3个论据）+结尾
下面给出我的范文，仅供参考。大家仍然要注意，所谓的范文因人而异。下面的文章，其实我是想让所有我的学生去体会，一个学会写作能力的和一个只是疯狂背模版的学生写出来的文章的异同之处。换言之，就是上课内容的一个简单例证而已。
In recent days, a growing number of museums are open free to the public home and abroad, which has aroused universal appeal among our young students. The hidden reasons behind it are obvious to us. First and foremost, the action has been aiming to attract more visitors to know more about the belongings that the museums display, which can broaden the views and horizons of the visitors. In addition, the purely free access to the museums may be the excuse of the non-free activities in the coming future.
Pleasant as the phenomenon is, it might bring about many a headache problem. The most apparent one is that it will lead to the increasingly pressing economic odds the museums will take. Besides, the free admission may give rise to the unconscious but unacceptable damages to the ancient relics, which is largely due to the increasing number of the visitors.
Actually I am in favor of the action of the free access to the museums. To start with, so important is the role that the museums are playing that we individuals are supposed to grasp any opportunity to know more about the history-based items. Moreover, it is the museums that offer an unmatchable place for us to cherish the past, which will absolutely exert more good than harm to the development of our heart and soul.
字数稍微超出了一点，是为了表达思想故意所致。不足之处，多多交流！（编辑：胡慧）
（本文摘自新东方祁胜初的博客，博客链接地址：http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_4c1101440100dts9.html）
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